my feedback of both site mockups

Redsun mockup:

LOVELY!!!

you are using a lot of photography however, which could be an issue. you need to make 2 categories: photos u can get from Stock images on the web that are copy right free, and photos we will need to shoot ourselves...might need to make an appointment and get several people into the green-screen studio...ill leave the details up to you william...

theres only 2 small things i think could be improved: the square of plain colour on each of the pages...i think it makes it a bit too cluttered. and the links, i think people may have trouble knowing they are links...if redsun is targeting ALL audiences, maybe they should look more like buttons somehow?...anyway just my personal opinion, what do other people think...

Eclipse mockup:

this is also really good..i love the atmosphere. i prefer the brown text instead of the white tho for some reason... qin, could you do mockups for the remaining pages too?

ill wait till the weekend, before i take these images and make them into draft websites, which everyone can then look at at the proper URLs. so untill the weekend, we can all make some more decisions, make more changes if needed...

good work guys! and go steph! at least 300 people have that redsun email now!